Is there a place where shipwrecks die?
Where they disintegrate into the sands
down into nothing and the shifting tides of time?
For this is where you'll find me.
Amongst the wreckage of time,
slowly rotting from inside out.
Once proud, I sailed lifes seas.
I beat the unforgiving tides of sorrow.
I rendered the waves to my will.
But I hit the rocks of uncertainty,
And now I become the wreckage;
With insatiable hunger tearing me from inside out,
I'm gutted by poseidons unrelenting fury.
The hooves of his steeds batter my shell,
as all that was me is washed away.
My structure, slowly falling apart.
My driving sails in shreds and tatters.
I am becoming no more.
I am becoming one with the waters,
with the sands;
Till I too ebb and flow in the currents,
granular and un-meaning,
miniscule and forgotten.















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SARAH
Visit my poetry / prose gallery!!!! Thanks for your time!!!
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and the development of one stanza into the other is quite nice.
As is the idea of time, while you talk of the past the present and what
will become of you. However as a note I think the second stanza
is weaker than the rest...but perhaps it is just because the first lines
are so brilliant!
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Regards,
Nemo_Outis
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Wit + Sarcasm X Misanthropy2 - Amiability + Charm =SorrowBurn
"And when it all came crashin' down, I became withdrawn and the only thing I knew how to do is to keep on keepin' on."
R.Z.
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Wit + Sarcasm X Misanthropy2 - Amiability + Charm =SorrowBurn
"And when it all came crashin' down, I became withdrawn and the only thing I knew how to do is to keep on keepin' on."
R.Z.
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You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.
... Evelyn ...
Thanks for the Fav
Ozz
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Wit + Sarcasm X Misanthropy2 - Amiability + Charm =SorrowBurn
"And when it all came crashin' down, I became withdrawn and the only thing I knew how to do is to keep on keepin' on."
R.Z.
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You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.
... Evelyn ...
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I can't erase all those things I've seen.]-
"...agh burzum-ishi krimpatul?"
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